L.O: Can I Retell the story of Icarus?

Daedalus and Icarus were trapped in the maze.

Icarus and Daedalus were feeding the birds seeds and picked their feathers .

Icarus flew off and said he can fly higher than the sun.

Daedalus told him not to fly too close to the sun because the wax will melt and he will fall into the sea.

Icarus didn’t listen and he fell into the sea and drowned.

Icarus leapt from the mountainous  tower and shot down then he 

spread  his wings and flew. Icarus got the hang of this he glided from 

cloud to cloud. Icarus started to boast and seide “I am better then 

Apollo” so Apollo struck a light bolt, and his wax started to melt. 

 suddenly he dropped “aaaaahhhhhhh” splash!!!!!!!!!

L.O: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

As they nervously leapt from the tower ledge, they plummeted down towards the glistening beige sand. Then suddenly, the feathered wings unfurled. They shot up! Soon enough Icarus and Daedalus were drifting in the afternoon breeze. At first Icarus was petrified, but in a few minutes, he was gliding through the air like a graceful, swift dove. But then, Icarus started to get over confident. Daedalus had warned Icarus not to fly too close to the sun, but Icarus was very big headed. So he flew as high as he could, and said to himself; “I can fly higher than Apollo.” Apollo had heard this, and was very angry. So he told the blazing sun to shoot its blinding sun rays at Icarus.

Icarus had begun to feel drips of hot liquid onto his leg. It was wax. The bright sun rays had made the flaky wax melt and let loose of the feathered wings. He was frozen with horror. Icarus was plunging down towards the deep churning sea, when he crashed into the azure, navy water.

L.O:Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choices?

As they leapt from the immense tower ledge, their feathered, powerful wings spread from their blistering backs. The cold breeze was finally out of their faces and they were soaring like eagles in the azure sky. Icarus soon got the hang of flying; he was twisting and turning all over the place. Dadils warned Icarus not to fly to high otherwise the throbbing wax would melt but icarus just kept flying and flying he soon claimed he has better than his father and then he even claimed he was better than the sun God Apollo. At that very second Apollo a woke he was stunned to hear such arrogant words come out of Icuarus’ mouth he melted the wax on Icuarus’ back. Icuarus plummeted down like a lightning bolt as he passed his father dadilis was in disbelieve. But nothing Dadilis did made a difference Icuarus could see rolling, rough sea and he knew it was going to be the end of his life. In just one splash it was over Icuarus had died.

Lo: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

As they leaped from the tower edge, and plummeted straight down. Their shiny pearl wings swooped them up just before they hit the ground, and took them up to the dark  purple sky . With the cool afternoon breeze at their faces. As they flew for longer Icarus started to understand flying. Icarus started to feel excessive pride. He flew higher and higher closer to the sun. Daedilous shouted to warn Icarus not to fly so high but Icarus just ignored him. He said “ I am the best at flying I can fly higher than the sun god Apollo.”. Icarus didn’t care about what he had done until ….

LO: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

They leapt from the tower, skimmed the walls and up they went. They glided above the cold black sea. Their wings gently fluttering in the crisp autumn air. When Icarus mastered his wings he gracefully soared up. Higher and higher he went closer and closer to the sun he came. Dadalus called” Icarus stop climbing” but Icarus ignored him. Over beautiful mountainsides they flew caching stunning views of golden beaches like ribbons leading to the azure horizon. Yet Icarus was still climbing. Then to seal his fate Icarus said “I can fly even higher than Apollo but Apollo heard this. He was not pleased with Icarus. He ordered the sun to shine its rays on Icarus. No sooner than Apollo said this then the sun broke throw the silvery clouds to shine its gleaming rays on Icarus. Icarus immediately knew he was in for trouble. The was on his back heated up in the sun, blistering his back and started to spread and drip off him, the wings loosened and the feathers slowly but surely fluttered off.

Icarus careered out of control, the black sea racing up to meet him. Icarus let out a last frustrated scream then he hit the water. A crimson trickle of blood left his crumpled body drifting away trough the black water. Icaruses body then sank beneath the cold waves.

Dadalus was worried; he could not see Icarus anywhere. Not near the silvery clouds, not above the mountains. Then in the sea below Dadalus spotted a crimson streak in the water and the limp lifeless body of Icarus beneath, just visible in the sea below

L.O can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

As they leapt from the tower ledge, Icarus and Dadalus plummated down the side of the tower. As they let the feathered wings spread, they shot up! Catching the afternoon breeze Icarus had built up confidence and started manoeuvring around in the air current .As they flew over the tempestuous sea Icarus soared up higher into the azure sky dadalus started getting worried and warned Icarus not to fly to high but Icarus ignored him an flew higher. He cried I’m beating Apollo at his own game, Apollo heard this and so he told the sun to raise the heat. The stiff wax started to melt on Icarus’s  burnt back. As the great  wings on Icarus’s back  fell of the fear that dadalus was dreading all this time had happened Icarus plunged down and down and SMACK! Breaking all his bones in his body he drowned to the bottom of the oceon and that was the end of Icarus.

Lo: can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

They leaped from the glistening tower ledge and soared through the air. Their snow white wings popping out .They gracefully glided through the air. Icarous struggling with every move he made. The sea blasting sprays at them like diamonds in the mid afternoon sun .they kept on going, the sea turning evil it was a dark blue green colure. the evil faces of the sea looking at them .It then started to to turn bright the glistening sun poking its face out of the clouds it gave a beautiful burst of light. Icarous growing with with confidence he flew up like a dove. He was the master of the sky the king of wind he could fly. He was growing to confident icarous do not fly to close to the sun but he did not listen then feathers were every were he fell to the sea and he was never seen again.

LO: Can I retell the end of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb  choice?

They tumbled down before they were inches from the cold hard ground. Then there wings spurted out like a jack in a box. They darted up.  The two of them drifted past the turbulent sea. They were becoming very good and Icarus wasn’t one to hide it. When they first took off his father warned him not to fly to far but he ignored and disobeyed. He went higher and higher. He claimed he could go higher than the mighty god Apollo. He didn’t stop rising. He was in reach of the sun. He was scorching. The wax started to drip, the feathers swayed from side to side. Sooner than later he was plunging down to the roaring sea. Splash.

The end

Lo: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

As they plummeted down from the side of the tower, the silk wings unfolded in the summer breeze. They began to glide up in the azure sky. Soon after they had master flying, and were gracefully souring through the clouds. Daedalus started to become worried and warned Icarus not to go to high but Icarus ignored Daedalus and darted higher and higher. Until the scorching wax burned his blistering back in the sunlight. He suddenly found himself plummeting down in to the monstrous pounding sea below him that swallowed him whole.

DARKNESS!