I looked up from the floor blood every were . A dark figure walking in a strait line slashing through every one Greek and Trojan .His armor and sword splatterd in blood ,cape torn and bloody .He was only a couple of meters away now then he took his helmet to to reveal a monstrous face his cheek gashed open dried blood covered his face ,were his eye should have been was a mix of eye jelly and flesh .A scab replaced his nose he had a huge piece of mettle stuck in his head from a sword .Get up said the warrior i did what he said fight lead the Greeks to victory ! and with that he vanished.
wow! what an amazing peace of writting ellis i really like the description
of the warrior. I especially your description of his face. well done you!!!