Finished. He was absolutely empty.
A lost boy sitting on the jagged rubble; once his home. Not just a building or a house, no a loving home with people that cared for that young boy.
That little boy was shocked; just in complete disbelief . He had ripped clothes, dusty hair, lifeless eyes and a touch of blood at least almost everywhere.
His sorrowful eyes glaring into his lost memories. Now wrecked just like his home, Almost identical . Everything was now ruined just from a natural disaster. Now he knew the real meaning of what a natural disaster can do to your whole life and how it can massively affect you. He was mesmerized at the destruction. He thought that he knew what he had to do , find his lost memories. He tried but they were completely lost just like himself he did not know what was real and what was not anymore. He did not even blink.
He was just cowering away in a corner trying to take in what had just happened he was rocking back and forth, it seemed like he was never going to stop. All that I could see inside of him was a little boy crying out for help.
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Letter to king Phillip
Dear king Phillip,
I am writing to inform you of an extremely intriguing structure that my crew and I have discovered whilst proceeding on mine and my crew’s troublesome journey of travelling through the dense rain forest. I will give you an inference and a description of what this new artifact looks like so that you can make a decision on what you would like us to do.
We saw that this unknown construction has: something that looks like a balcony, a pyramid shape, four staircases on each corners of the pyramid, lots of tiny stones and pebbles in fact, it was hindered with stones. To be specific, the pyramid had all kinds of staircases, different shapes and sizes. One of the staircases, was very steep and was shaped pleasantly, whereas, the other one was very small and shallow, it had so many stairs, nearly twice the same as the one opposite it. This pyramid was almost symmetrical it had things different shapes and sizes so it wasn’t accurately symmetrical.
It has occurred to me that I need to conclude on this, and by doing this, I need to write an inference: This structure may have been used as a holy place of worship, due to it being very tall and closer to the sky; it was also empty and made you feel cleansed. There was something that looked like a balcony on the top of the pyramid, I was thinking that people go up the stairs on the pyramid and get straight to the top, near the balcony and start praying or just having some quiet thinking time to themselves. This pyramid may have also been used as something a bit like an activity to get to the top and see what you can spot up there, as a result, it had stairs and it was very lofty.
We were all hindered with questions about this mysterious pyramid and not entirely sure of what to do. Thank you for your time, your majesty.
Yours sincerely, The crew
Allies or were they?
Many ancient years ago, so long ago that this was buried by time, during the torsion war the walls of troy were crumbling to the ground. Thankfully the torsions had allies and friends. One of their allies that had come to help was a humble city in Argos. In this humble city, there was a noble man, he fought and fought to save all kinds of cities and he would travel to who knows where just to save a city.
He was a prince, prince Aeron, and he had one sister princess, Areadne. Unfortunately the king, king Aesly, his father was old and he could not really fight or go to war as much.
By the way, if you are thinking, what about their mother, well, she sadly passed away and from that moment on, whenever Aesly thought about her, he prayed to the gods and quietly sobbed. After a while, he just couldn’t take it anymore. He had to see her he felt so guilty, so he went to see her. He had also lost in the game of life. King Aeron now had taken the throne. However, he wasn’t happy but heartbroken he found it hard to breathe when being an orphan. Although he knew that he had to help out his city now that he owned it.
Time and time again, Aeron thought about how much, he was of course loved by his city and they thought that because he was so brave courageous and heroic so they thought he was an immortal god. He exclaimed to them that he wasn’t, but they wouldn’t listen. In the end they managed to persuade him that he was a god, which was unbelievable! However, he did sort of feel like he was important and he needed to be noticed for all his hard work. So yes he now was an official god.
Many blood moons passed, when Aeron was asleep that night, he had a very peculiar dream; a dark figure had come to have a little chat with him. Aeron was in his own dream. He gazed up from his book; a dark shadow had come, dragging his feet across the grainy sand he was limping , rasping for breath weak. The door creaked open, he thundered in, “Hubris, bad, no need for it, do not let it over come you!” Aeron suddenly woke up. He chuckled. “Wow”
Aeron, well he felt really bored of having to walk all the way around the palace. He just did not know how his father could do it. Anyway, Aeron thought he would build slaves fit for a king so he did just that nothing less and nothing more. Well when I say he built them he actually got other people to build them for him. He knew that his slaves were built out of the finest bronze so they did not eat sleep and he did not have to spend any money on them. Aeron felt good he felt proud. He didn’t really want to spoil the moment!
As the year flew by, Aeron was also flying by on the standards of course. He was just getting more and more confident which must have been a good thing, right. Aeron stared over at his gleaming city, “it is amazing. Just beautiful.” Aeron said to his sister.
“Yes brother. Look at what we have truly created.” She replied.
“No, I have created the best city ever!” at that very same moment, within a blink of an eye, Aeron froze. His sister also froze they had both turned to black bronze. His city froze too it turned to gothic black bronze as well. It crumbled to the ground leaving nothing but shattered pieces of bronze on the floor. However, Aeron stayed staring at his once beautiful city, And still to this day, Aeron stays weeping in sadness forever. Continue reading Allies or were they?
A mysterious figure
I spotted a figure dragging his feet across the plain white marble. He was coming towards me and my trusty loom, I looked up he was silently muttering whilst hissing and snarling away. He lowered his head and his eyes were glaring, he was in full battle armour, blood had been splashed onto his helmet.
As he was ambling past the crowd, he was giving penetrating stares. He was extremely impatient I knew he was coming towards me; however, I could not change the future so I carried on weaving as usual. His eyes were like volcanoes about explode and erupt with lava. He was shoving past everyone as if he was on a higher standard than everybody else (I don’t think he was). He was causing terrible arguments He looked so irritated. He had such a dark and shadowy figure.
I could see that people were trying to get rid of him and it did not end very well at all for them. He had bared teeth and his face was wrinkled. I was in disgust! His mouth twisted and went small with revulsion. “Sorry please can you just move out of the way a little?” said a lady “move out of the way you want me to move out of the way for you? Do you know who I am, peasant” he exclaimed. He instantly pushed her out of the way. silence
Lost and not found
Lo: can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?
As they leapt from the tower ledge, plunging down, their gorgeous wings sprung up just as they were about to hit the rough concrete ground. There was a summer breeze and the air thermos keeping them up soon enough they were gracefully flying and soaring everywhere. They darted from here to there. They could see the tall king’s tower below them in the background it was a fantastic view and they were gliding so well. Their wings fitted perfectly onto their throbbing backs now blistered because they had been up in in the air flying for so long. Icarus was going higher and higher until… `I am the best at flying, I can even fly higher than all the gods on mount Olympus. ` Although Apollo had heard this terrible news and he was furious. Apollo had seen that they had attached their wing onto their backs with wax so Apollo sent down his rays of sun to melt all the wax off their backs. Daedulus tried to warn Icarus not to glide too high to the sun, however Icarus took no notice of Daedulus` words and completely ignored everything his father had said to him. No instead Icarus went as far as he could go right next to the sun. Icarus had now plummeted straight in to the ocean slap bang in the middle of the sea. He was never to be seen again!
The end!