The leaf is a symbol of hope;The girl will never let hope take place.
The helmet is heavy;It made the girl feel week and trapped.
No one understands
Alone in a bottle ; stuck in something you can’t get out of. Bottling it up. Know one knows you;know one knows you excites. Each stone is a bad feeling; every stone surrounds you. You are a locked box and the key is lost in the sea. Their’s a zip on your mouth;know one knows how you feel.Clouds in your mind.Nothing to look forward to.
any moons ago, in a place that is now buried by time, was a gentle stream, that would lead you to a forgotten land with a mighty king named king Hermes.
Hermes was the god of thieves so he had many slaves. One of his slaves name was Ellie and she had battered, old, rotten clothes, unlike Hermes he had a cloke softer than silk and it smelt like butterfly milk. No one really knew what that meant. Ellie had cloths as brown and as worn as mud.
Friday 13th November 2015
As I glanced up I saw a tall dark figure approaching towards me. The figure was shoving and pushing their way towards me. I wasn’t sure how I was going to re-act.
When I first saw the terrifying figure I soon realized that it was Arese! He had a dark scar across his beady eye and splattered blood across his heavy metal helmet. His legs were crised crossed with scars. But when I saw the mysterious eyes all they were focused on was my light green eyes. His eyes are two black marbles filed with fire. His heart was filled with fury and sparks of lightning.
Outside I could hear the rustling trees and the howling wind. The harsh breeze was making Areses black bold cloke rustle. His deep breaths made me shiver and shake, it was like a moving nightmare.
Then when he first spoke to me, his voice was the deepest voice like in a horror movie. “MISTAKES!……………….You have made many mistakes.”
He got closer. He was as silent as a shadow and his armour was as dark as a midnight sky, but instead of stars it was ……………BLOOD! All I could see was a dark soul in side of him.
Thursday 1 October 2015
L.O. Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?
They leapt from the tall, old battered tower ledge. They jumped of they were falling but emgently the warm cosy wings started to unfold. Suddenly Icares gets the hang of flying and he marstered it straight away. Daderless gave Icares 1 warning not to fly to hi to the sun otherwise the wax on your back will start to melt of. Icaes ignored that warning and said that he was way better than Helios the god of the flaming sun. Helios was furious to hear what he was hearing. Strait away out of know where a powerful strike of the sun to come down and strike Icares on his red back suddenly his huge powerfully wings fall off like a volcano about to arupt. Icares started to fall he was terrified the biggest shock of his dark lonely life. Suddenly Icares just dropped strait into the dark, deep sea. Death was ahead of him. He hit strait into the warter and all of his bones snapped!