L O can I retell the ending of a story using  noun phrase and accurate verb choice ?

Deadelus and Icarus leaped for their life off the tower ledge , Deadelus was first to jump and  Icarus was second . Deadelus  plummeted down and then  Deadelus shot up into the  salty air. And then it was Icaruses turn to jump off the tall jagged tower  he took a deep breath and he jumped! He was just about to hit the ground until his wings unfolded and he took of like a bird in to the air

Both Icarus and Deadelus were air born  they were both amazing at weaving in and out of houses . At first Icarus was terrified of dying  but Icurus was flying really really high “ICARUS GET DOWN HERE” Deadelus shoted he flew so high and scremmed “Im better than Apollo  Apollo hated that and in fact he  sent a sun ray and the ray was so hot that his wax melted and the wings fell of and he fell straight into the sea.

THE END