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My Mimistake

Earthquake Survivor

My light is swinging back and fourth. I think nothing of it. I turn back to the TV to see what is happening else were. It blanks out so i look out the window.

Something is wrong.

I grab a bag and put some clothes in it and grasp  a blanket on my way out. I’m not going to…..

Make it. Am I. Am I dead? I hear a voice.Iit leaks through the deafening silence.

“Are you ok?” It says. I want to answer but I cant. I’m incapable of  moving. I desperetly try to breathe but the Dust stops me.

I heard a siron . It was ringing in my ears like an insult.

A cold hand opened  my eyes. I could see.

Where am I?

 

The water logged ruin

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I was standing in the middle of a room crammed with artifacts in every corner.

How did I get here?

Where was here?

My torch flickered out as I trudged through the water logged ruin. I ducked under a collapsed pillar into what appeared to be a town. All the buildings were nearly identical to each other and in the centre of this town was a statue that towered over me like an enraged dragon.

It was made of lapis lazuli and the finest opals for eyes. I clambered on to the statue to see where I was.

Wedding disaster!

Year 6's Tragic Tales

Many moons ago, in a place long forgotten, there was a young boy. He was a lonely boy.  He had just about escaped from his home with his life, as his father was swallowed whole by a Griffin.

He was running in the moon light, his friends, his family, his home behind him. He collapsed. He was so tiered from the night before because he had feared his farther would be hurt. He was right.   That night he slept well. The wind blew leaves over him, covering him like a blanket.

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Cat walk woman

The Greek gods and goddesses

I glanced up from my canvas, only to see a woman striding towards me proudly, as if she were walking along a cat walk. In my mind I was wondering what a woman like her would want anything to do with me? My tapestrys! She probably wanted me to weave a picture of her! I grasped my needle and started to pretend I was weaveing something. I peered up to see if she was still approaching me, but she was towering over me like a temple, fixing her hair in a mirror covered in precious gems.

“ You better stop what you’re doing…” there was a deafening silence while she fiddled with a loose gem on the back of the mirror. “NOW!” she shouted. Her angelic voice echoed throughout the market. Everybody stopped what they were doing and stared.

“We shall have a Weave off!” She declared. When she said that I knew what I had to do. This lady was acting like a Goddess, and I’m sure she’s not, so I’ll make a fool of her and every one of the gods.

She turned her back to the crowed. “I’ll see you tomorrow at sunrise.”

 

The story of Icarus

Icarus soars too high!

LO: can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

They leapt out of the tower window, adrenalin pumping in there vains. They were out! They were plummeting towards the ground, seconds away from death! Their wings sprang to life as they were lifted into the azure sky, like the gods had lifted them and welcomed them to their world. The blistering pain from the wax had nearly vanished. “Don’t fly t high or the wax on your back will melt! Daedilus warned. Icarus ignored his father for he thought he was better at flying than the sun god himself! Up he soared until he was flying with the clouds. The powerful sun god, Apollo was furious that a mere mortal like Icarus would challenge him! Apollo shot a raise of sun upon Icarus’s back. Icarus plunged into the waters deep.

Icarus was never to be seen again. Or was he?