LO: can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

They leapt off the wooden ledge and plummeted down the side of the tower .The azure wings opened at the last minute catching them just before they hit the glistening yellow sand bellow them . They shot up into the sky by now there backs had started to burn , blister and boil .By then Icarus had mastered the art of flying and became ignorant to his father . Icarus was going quite high so Daediluss had to warn him not to go too high because the wax on hiss back might melt off his back. But Icarus ignored him and simply said I am the best at flying even better than the sun god Apollo . Apollo over heard this and became especially angry and sent boiling sun rays to melt the wax off Icarusies back …AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

SPLAT.