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A Snaky Death!

Many moons ago in an unremembered place, there were two sisters named Antigone and Persephone. They were very kind and caring. They were fleeing from their homes and land in order to survive the invading Greeks. They shared what they had and cared for the wounded. When the two sisters were out of the land and in a safe place, Antigone and Persephone started building shelter for themselves and the other refugees. They made it home they cut down trees with their mother’s old kitchen knife and made homes using the left over wood for fire.

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Mysterious figure

Lo: Can I show what type of character my god is?

I looked up from my wine and started walking around my lonely hut. Patroklos is off fighting for those selfish Greeks while I’m home alone. Who does he think he is, I would let the Greeks suffer, and they deserve it.

Then I saw a small figure dancing and prancing elegantly around the battle field swiftly, hoplites bowing at her feet. Her pearl white dress was glowing. Big round eyes gleaming like a Lapis Lazuli. Her arms were swinging side to side. Her cheeks were Rosie red and hot. She approached me with a welcoming smile. She spoke. Her warm voice soothing. “ Fight”

“W w why”

“ Fight for the Greeks you will get your prize”

“Why! Agamemnon stole my Brisis, I am not putting my Myrmidons in danger for HIM! They fight for me not him and we were allies until he stole my Brisis, my myrmidons WOULD  be fighting for him IF HE HAD RESPECT FOR ME!!!

“ Do it for me and for you. Your ships are burning and you don’t care! You will get stranded if you don’t fight. Patroklos may be doing it for you now but if you don’t get out there and help him he will die!”

She puffed her hair and skipped off with armour in her place.

 

Icarus’s unfortinate flying death

Lo: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choice?

As they leaped from the tower edge, and plummeted straight down. Their shiny pearl wings swooped them up just before they hit the ground, and took them up to the dark  purple sky . With the cool afternoon breeze at their faces. As they flew for longer Icarus started to understand flying. Icarus started to feel excessive pride. He flew higher and higher closer to the sun. Daedilous shouted to warn Icarus not to fly so high but Icarus just ignored him. He said “ I am the best at flying I can fly higher than the sun god Apollo.”. Icarus didn’t care about what he had done until ….