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Lost in tears

Lost,

as I walk through the tron ruble, I am isolated. Surrounded by what use to be my home. The rough wind brushes agaimst my face like brustles on a broom.cold tears of pain swivels down my face. I am innocent.

In m hands I hold what is left of my cherished memories. My emerald persing eye’stair into the dark , emptiness. Iam helpless.

the memories of when it all happened still haunts me. I am trapped. I sand with shock. I don’t know what to do. all my feelings are bottle up.what is that I am feeling?

I am lost for words.

The Figure Hidden in the Shadows

LO: Can I show what type of character my god is?

I glanced up into the midnight blue sky and I saw a figure descending from the heavens. She whizzed past me!

She was short but fast. Her eyes were gleaming like polished diamonds. She walked light on her feet and her hair gracefully floated in the calm night breeze. I heard her prowling through the emerald grass with silent feet.

A soft voice echoed from the bushes saying “you call yourself a hero, but we all know that you are no hero.” She whispered. “Yes I am.” I said. “Prove it!” she growled. “I will!” I roared.

She leaped forward and stared at me coldly with ice-blue eyes. Her golden bow glowed in the night and her clothes as soft as silk.

The Terrible Ending of Icarus

Lo: Can I retell the ending of a story using noun phrases and accurate verb choices?

As the burning wax began to melt, the purl white feathered wings began unfurled. Suddenly wings began to shake with fear. Then they darted across the sapphire sky in a rush! Icarus was petrified at first but then he got the hang of it, in fact he mastered it but started to have excessive pride. Icarus was warned by his father not to fly to high, but he ignored his father and flew higher and higher. The calm breeze started to carrying him up and he was drifting in the azure sky. Icarus was not thinking and then said that he could go higher then the god of the sun Apollo. Apollo over heard what Icarus said so Apollo got furious and then he told the gold glittering sun to shin it sun rays upon the land. So the sun shone its flaming hot sun rays and then the wax began to drip down his back and the plummeted into the deep, rapid sea. The hard navy blue sea started crushing his bone and was never to be seen again by his father ever again. His father wept in sadness.