Trekking through the forest; a shiver in my bones.
Sweat pours.
My heart pounding; my hands trembling.
My head full of mysteries.
Mud is oozing inbetween my toes.
Startled by a rustling, I hault.
Something is watching me…
Trekking through the forest; a shiver in my bones.
Sweat pours.
My heart pounding; my hands trembling.
My head full of mysteries.
Mud is oozing inbetween my toes.
Startled by a rustling, I hault.
Something is watching me…
wow, great work. it is very tense and i love the ellipse at the end. i want to find out what happens next. i love the description especially “my heart pounding; my hands trembling.” because it show this character is tense and is on a mission.