As the battle raged along the beach, I glared up and spotted a mysterious figure raging ferociously through my titanic army, he was coming straight to me.
A vast man he was, with a proud posture as well. He strolled past people like one of us but his roar was like no ones. He bellowed out to anyone who dared to come near. He was powerful, something else.
He thundered pass my warriors. I could now see his deathly scarred face.
Which God has entered the battlefield?
Katie- I really like how you yoused the word ‘Proud’ It really shows that this character is proud and has his/her head held high . This also shows that the charector is proud of him/her self. Is your God Ares?
I think your God is Ares because you say he has a scarred face which suggests he has been in many wars. I really like the use of proud posture because it gives a good insight on the fact he is a God for gods would walk very proudly because they are very important.Great work!