Her melancholic eyes are wide open like deathly pits into her dark soul… Despair… Her lifeless eyes bled tears like cursed heavy raindrops across her crimson cheeks… Sorrowful… By Ben.
Her melancholic eyes are wide open like deathly pits into her dark soul… Despair… Her lifeless eyes bled tears like cursed heavy raindrops across her crimson cheeks… Sorrowful… By Ben.
Well done! Wow what fantastic word choices to reinforce your similes , I definitely get a sense of Helena’s pain.