Her Forlorn eyes are wide open like deathly gates into her bleeding soul sorrowful her wide eyes spewed tears like tricking rain arcoss her red cheeks. despair
Her Forlorn eyes are wide open like deathly gates into her bleeding soul sorrowful her wide eyes spewed tears like tricking rain arcoss her red cheeks. despair
well done i like the way u used very strong vocabulary
I liked the way you have described her eyes . I like the words deathly gates because they are powerful.
I like the phrase deathly gates 🙂