Helena pain poem by soraia

Her forlorn eyes are open wide like two woe begotten pits into her lifeless soul. melancholy
her dejected eyes spewed tears like forgotten water falls across her trembling cheeks. despair

2 thoughts on “Helena pain poem by soraia

  1. Hi Soraia i really like your sentences because they have a lot of great words and i love the adjectives but what does spewed mean? sorry i have no idea…

  2. hello evil fellow human being.
    Your work is very… INTERESTING…
    And indeed it is very… Well it has a nice sense of description and the vocabulary is good.
    It iz very good.
    ~peace from Zummy

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