Her lifeless eyes were wide open like forbidding pits of tormenting pits of pain.
sorrow
Her dejected eyes wept heart broken tears like raindrops gently trickling down her shaking cheeks.
grief
Her lifeless eyes were wide open like forbidding pits of tormenting pits of pain.
sorrow
Her dejected eyes wept heart broken tears like raindrops gently trickling down her shaking cheeks.
grief
i really like the way you used different words than sad.
its epic!!!!!!
I really like yours 🙂
maybe you could change one of the ‘pits’ in the first one
I like the word grief you used maybe instead of sorrow you could use melancholic