Her pallid eyes are wide open like two crimson coloured portals into her over burdened emotions.
Pallid
Her pleading eyes spewed tears like melting icicles dripping across her crimson trembling cheeks
Desperate
Her pallid eyes are wide open like two crimson coloured portals into her over burdened emotions.
Pallid
Her pleading eyes spewed tears like melting icicles dripping across her crimson trembling cheeks
Desperate
yours is really good
I really like your first similie
Hi James
You used great words in your poems!!!
hi i really like your as it got so much power words