Her desperate eyes are wide open like two deadly portals leading into her bleeding soul.
Sorrowful
Her melancholic eyes bled oily tears like two deadly portals leaking cursed taps down her tremberling cheeks
heavy harted
Her desperate eyes are wide open like two deadly portals leading into her bleeding soul.
Sorrowful
Her melancholic eyes bled oily tears like two deadly portals leaking cursed taps down her tremberling cheeks
heavy harted
I liked it when you said bleeding soul
i like the way you have matched the similes with the real reason
I like the way you used heart browen and used the ajestive
Mia i like the placement of your verbs and the descriptive word you have used in the right places. You have also used very descriptive and you have also used very good feelings (word).