Dejected eyes wide open like two toxic portal into the core of her soul.
Forlorn.
Soaked eyes lament desperate tears like meandering, colorless rivers across her quivering cheeks.
Hopeless.
Dejected eyes wide open like two toxic portal into the core of her soul.
Forlorn.
Soaked eyes lament desperate tears like meandering, colorless rivers across her quivering cheeks.
Hopeless.
Wow , I love your choice of words in your similes. They are consistent and maintain that feeling of melancholy and pain . Well done for challenging your self and thinking much more accurately about your word choice .