Her yearning eyes are wide open like two desperate gates into her pleading sorrow,
Despair,
Her weeping eyes leaked oily tears like rain drops trickling down across her crimson cheeks,
Forlorn.
Her yearning eyes are wide open like two desperate gates into her pleading sorrow,
Despair,
Her weeping eyes leaked oily tears like rain drops trickling down across her crimson cheeks,
Forlorn.
Wow, you have really conveyed Helena’s lovestruck pain by using accurate similes and consistent adjectives.