Her sorrowful eyes are wide open like two lifeless pits in to her melancholic soul
forlorn
Her eyes wept tears like a lifeless stream across her blood shot face
soroful
Her sorrowful eyes are wide open like two lifeless pits in to her melancholic soul
forlorn
Her eyes wept tears like a lifeless stream across her blood shot face
soroful
I like the part when you talked about her soul.
I like your use of melancholic and blood shot face- well done .
I like your work marika. i liked it when you mentioned about the pits. you could of used another word for lifeless because it was repeated. other than that well done 🙂
Well done Majeed, I agree with your feedback and I can see you have thought carefully about how we can comment positively on other’s work
i enjoyed your simile because the words really pulled me!!!!!!!!!!!
hi i really like the way you said like her sorrowful eyes are wide poen that was good
I liked the way you have the phrase lifeless stream across her cheeks 🙂