Darkness
The darkness surrounds me closing in on the little tin that I sit in. Nobody understands the pain that I sit through. Nobody understands the things that I sit through. I feel like the world has stopped but the darkness does not. Here I am in a little tin I keep it closed but people keep peaking in.
Milo I really like it when you typed {darkness surrounds me closing in on the little tin that I sit in} because It shows how the girl is sitting alone in darkness and its basically show darkness is crushing her literally. :]
Your work is really powerful. I can really see how the girl is feeling and what she is going threw.The words you used like: peaking and pain really show how shes feeling.