Isolation: emptiness.
A girl staring into the distance watching her father’s office building tumble to the ground.
Her lifeless eyes, so plain. Her mind forcing her not to believe it’s real. Her feet covered in scars and blood.
Salty tears trickle down her face and fall to the rubble below that was once a home; her home.
Losing so much in less than ten minutes: feeling like she should give up. Feeling like she has lost hope.
Her dad, who she once loved, has gone: he’s gone. An icy dagger stabs right through her heart. Her home, a soul she once cared for, all gone at the same time. Forever…
The ground shook again: darkness!
Danger roaming the streets.
Cracks appearing on the earth.
Will it ever end?
Hi Mazie,
I like how you have used a rhetorical question at the end. It really makes you want to know what is going to happen to the boy next.
Good work!
Thank you Flora. You are right it is really effective.
Wow, amazing i can really picture the scene in my head. I like that it is set in an office.