LO: Can I show what type of character my god is?
I glanced up into the midnight blue sky and I saw a figure descending from the heavens. She whizzed past me!
She was short but fast. Her eyes were gleaming like polished diamonds. She walked light on her feet and her hair gracefully floated in the calm night breeze. I heard her prowling through the emerald grass with silent feet.
A soft voice echoed from the bushes saying “you call yourself a hero, but we all know that you are no hero.” She whispered. “Yes I am.” I said. “Prove it!” she growled. “I will!” I roared.
She leaped forward and stared at me coldly with ice-blue eyes. Her golden bow glowed in the night and her clothes as soft as silk.
Great work Calista!
I really liked how you described how Artemis was walking. It paints a picture in your head of someone bending over and walking.