The mysterious figure

LO: Can show what type of character my god is?

I glanced up from my loom and saw a dark figure stumbling through the crowd. ‘Excuse me, could you possibly move’ he kept saying in a soft trembled voice. His calloused hands, which were wrapped around his shaking stomach, were jet black. They were old and worn out they had been working hard I could tell. However his eyes were flinching at the smallest movements that the crowd made. They were like a never ending earthquake. The cowardly figure was getting on my nerves if he wanted to tell me something he should just step forward and talk to me. But I knew that he wouldn’t talk me unless I talked to him first. ‘You their’ I bellowed ‘just come and talk to me’ the figure trembled and stepped forward. ‘Well the thing is you have apparently gone against the gods, would it be ok if you possibly stopped?’ he asked in such an anxious voice. The figure had been sent from mount Olympus. He was a god, but he hardly acted like one.

 

 Which Greek deity has arrived to warn Arachne?

2 thoughts on “The mysterious figure

  1. Hi Jen ,
    Great work I love the description for the God.
    It shows who it is when the God says could you possibly move!
    How the figure trembles I think this Greek deity is Hephaestus!
    Well done

  2. Hi Jen ,
    Great work I love the description for the God.
    It shows who it is when the God says could you possibly move!
    How the figure trembles I think this Greek deity is Hephaestus!
    Well done

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